What can I say, the pacing and humor of Khonjin is a huge inspiration for me.
What can I say, the pacing and humor of Khonjin is a huge inspiration for me.
This is the funniest haha its me shulptoons and i really like this thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMake one where willy has a hat but he also loses his hat and is sad, i think it would be funny thank you willy you make me lagu h and giggle every time i watch one of ur flash cartoons oh willy ha ha
Thank you man :)
either do something original or quit, even if you get good at copying egoraptor's style, you will never be anything more than a counterfit. Make your own artstyle or leave NG.
Proud of you boy
Flikkernock is fuck ing dumb ass allright robot jone you have my support, 2 thumbs for u
goddamn right rate 5 please
My cock has been hard for so long it hurts, I think i have to call some sort of medical professional
The art here looks like it was traced from a how to draw anime book. Work on foreshortening and actually making things look like they were done frame by frame instead of looking overly clean and tweened. This looks like something i would see in 2006, not 2016. I dont hate this but it needs work.
what a baby
you know what Shulp i had up here with you 2 please hurt yourself MMMMMMMMM
I really want you to improve as an artist man, so I am gonna be a bit blunt here:
The Humor: Didn't really work. It relies too heavily on esoteric jokes, memes, and very basic and predictable jokes.
The art/Animation: The anatomy was very basic at best, a lot of the faces seemed to be traced, There weren't enough inbetweens and there was no easing. That being said with some work (I personally suggest watching tutorials and reading the animator's survival guide), you could really become a decent animator.
The audio: Very sloppy mixing, relies on ear rape.
I dont hate this, but I see something that could, albeit with hours of practice, be good looking animation.
shulp, I appreciate the constructive criticism, and it's all been noted. I did it really badly mostly because it was just some shitty filler in time for the holidays. The only face I traced was from Urb's cheesecake truck video in a few of the frames. Other than that nothing else is traced. I wish you'd be more specific as to how it was very basic and predictable. I'm kind of a beginner and still learning about animation so I will look at some more tutorials and perhaps get a copy of the animator's survival guide. Anyways thank you for the review.
Age 24, Male
Animator
Arizona
Joined on 11/7/15