Shulp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Willie's Life - Ice Cream]

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMake one where willy has a hat but he also loses his hat and is sad, i think it would be funny thank you willy you make me lagu h and giggle every time i watch one of ur flash cartoons oh willy ha ha

DavisToons responds:

Thank you man :)

[Robot Boy Show - 1-15-16]

Flikkernock is fuck ing dumb ass allright robot jone you have my support, 2 thumbs for u

robot-jones responds:

goddamn right rate 5 please

[Robot Boy Show - 12/31/15]

what a baby

robot-jones responds:

you know what Shulp i had up here with you 2 please hurt yourself MMMMMMMMM

[Rule 34 Samara]

I really want you to improve as an artist man, so I am gonna be a bit blunt here:

The Humor: Didn't really work. It relies too heavily on esoteric jokes, memes, and very basic and predictable jokes.
The art/Animation: The anatomy was very basic at best, a lot of the faces seemed to be traced, There weren't enough inbetweens and there was no easing. That being said with some work (I personally suggest watching tutorials and reading the animator's survival guide), you could really become a decent animator.
The audio: Very sloppy mixing, relies on ear rape.
I dont hate this, but I see something that could, albeit with hours of practice, be good looking animation.

Imprez responds:

shulp, I appreciate the constructive criticism, and it's all been noted. I did it really badly mostly because it was just some shitty filler in time for the holidays. The only face I traced was from Urb's cheesecake truck video in a few of the frames. Other than that nothing else is traced. I wish you'd be more specific as to how it was very basic and predictable. I'm kind of a beginner and still learning about animation so I will look at some more tutorials and perhaps get a copy of the animator's survival guide. Anyways thank you for the review.